New and Improved Story Board

After making the script I made an updated storyboard. I know I am not the best artist so please excuse my amateur skills. Thanks !!

In case you can't read the descriptions... reading left to right
Box One: Close up, focus on Ambers face, Alarm starts, changes focs
Box Two: Mid-shot of Amber starting YOuTUbe video, looking pretty.
Box Three: Amber start talking about her day (Mid shot)

Box Four: Long shot and two shot of Amber looking at her passed out father on couch.
Box Five: Establishing shot of our school/ Ambers school, wide shot
Box Six: Voice over about test. POV/ close up of hands with formulas.